Saturday 2 November 2013


GRASS
I may be tender
But I do break the Earth’s crust
And look at the Sun

Written for Haiku Heights
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11 comments:

  1. Unknown3 November 2013 at 04:18

    Yes tender yetstrong enough to break a hard surface. Lovely take on the prompt Sumana.
    Inviting you to read mine at
    http://geetaavij.wordpress.com/2013/11/03/its-beautiful-its-troubling-its-addictive-its/

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  2. Unknown3 November 2013 at 08:04

    Nicely said. A wonderful visual. Good job.

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  3. Unknown3 November 2013 at 08:59

    Lovely imagery!
    Stop by and read mine if your have a chance!
    http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com/2013/11/novembers-grass-haiku.html

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  4. cheryl3 November 2013 at 09:32

    I feel this too

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  5. Gillena Cox3 November 2013 at 12:09

    tough critters

    much love...

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  6. World So Wide4 November 2013 at 03:34

    So true!

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  7. dsnake14 November 2013 at 07:40

    i liked how the grass looked at the sun. :)

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  8. Reshma4 November 2013 at 17:14

    tender grass often withstands tough storms...Nice verse Sumana :)

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  9. eyeography5 November 2013 at 08:12

    amazing..
    very well said... :)

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  10. Eliz Frank8 November 2013 at 04:58

    Indeed... What a wonderful piece of revelatory haiku.
    Eliz

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  11. kalpana solsi8 November 2013 at 07:14

    The thin blade of grass can penetrate deep into the earth's crust. Do not be mistaken by its size.
    beautiful haiku.

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Thank you. I am inspired.

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