Monday 3 March 2014


SCRAP





Scraps strewn all over
Dark velvet sky holds them all
They shine and give light

They shine and give light
Who did such orderly mess?
I gape and wonder

Posted for Haiku Horizons
&
Shared with Real Toads

14 comments:

  1. wow ! scraps of celestial bodies ! nicely painted in words !!!

    ReplyDelete
  2. smiles...its a beautiful orderly mess now is it...
    cool desciption of the night sky

    ReplyDelete
  3. "orderly mess" I love that...beautiful piece

    ReplyDelete
  4. I hadn't thought of stars as scraps before, this will make me look closer next time. Enjoyed this Sumana!

    ReplyDelete
  5. Beauty lies in the eye of the beholder :)

    ReplyDelete
  6. Well someone is responsible for that orderly mess...I don't believe it is random:)

    ReplyDelete
  7. The starry sky always seem to question the mind, Beautifully done Sumana :)

    ReplyDelete
  8. The stars as little scraps of light! A delightful image! :)

    ReplyDelete
  9. Scraps of light in a night sky is a beautiful thought.

    ReplyDelete
  10. To gape and wonder seems like the only possible response!

    ReplyDelete
  11. Sumana, I like your use of the "orderly mess". This is an intriguing contrast that captured my attention. :-) Alice

    ReplyDelete
  12. That orderly mess is spectacular and lovely ~ A Divine hand, i would say ~

    ReplyDelete

Thank you. I am inspired.